Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, November 20, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Kia ora, yes I think it is a very good idea to end homelessness Jacob. You speech is very thoughtful and I'm sure many of other people will think of your speech and think they need to change this terrible matter. Next time you could explain a bit more about your speech as a blurb. But other than that I love your speech and I will defiantly keep this speech in mind :)
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