Hi bloggers this is the recount writing that I did in literacy time, it is still a work in progress. can I please have some feedback? Anyway, I will see you next time bye.
Tuesday, March 16, 2021
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Hi I'm Willem from Kokatahi- Kowhitirangi school. I love your writing of the triathlon. I like that there is a monster in it coming to eat the ducks.
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